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Meanwhile ... by TheKaji Meanwhile ... by TheKaji
Fantasy-themed female charakter.

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:iconshiftingsilvyr:
Here's my (hopefully constructive) viewpoint.

1) Her arms- While your overall anatomy is wonderful, look at the 'thickness' of her arms...
2) Her left foot- The angle seems off, and this could be due to a couple things: Possibly the tangent line that lines up with the skull behind/beneath that foot, or possibly just a mis-positioned reference.
3)Her helm- The bottom right feels like cloth, like it folds and wraps around her, but the top left feels rather flat. Almost as though it needs better definition via shading or that it should wrap closer to her head, not with herhair.
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i think your art is looks good in all,nice concept too,i like the cloud sense,but i think i lost the sense of it,the color are monochrome dominate in gray,for the character shading good but i think her head too large for her body haha,this picture not have a depth and when i first see it it looks not interested for my eyes,cause the near and far position not had different in saturation colour and the light effect in the character will be perfect if you add a little circle of light with a little blur in the light source,keep improving :)
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Awesome work!
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TheKaji Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for your kind words :) im glad it meets your taste
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:iconvenom-v13:
Oh yeah your welcome! ;)
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:iconshiftingsilvyr:
I really like your style on this piece, it's beautifully handled.
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